{"id":38503,"title":"Critique Wanted: Dolomites ski trip [Canon Sure Shot Zoom XL, built-in 39-85mm, Rollei Infrared 400]","author":"ItalianJack_72","permalink":"https://www.reddit.com/r/analog/comments/1tertjn/critique_wanted_dolomites_ski_trip_canon_sure/","description":"This is from my second roll of film of my entire life, shot during recent a ski trip in the Dolomites.\n\nSome of these photos I like, but there’s something about them that still doesn’t fully convince me.\n\nMost of them the photos are more about the place than the people in them. When someone appears in the frame, I usually prefer them to feel like part of the scene rather than the main subject.\n\nThat’s why I often avoid showing faces too clearly. I like when a person adds scale, movement, or atmosphere, without turning the photo into a portrait.\n\nI’m curious whether that comes across in these shots, or if in some cases the photos would be stronger with a more obvious subject.\n\nI’d really appreciate honest feedback, even on small things. I’m still pretty new to film, so I’m trying to understand what I should pay more attention to next time — composition, exposure, timing, ecc.\n\nGear:  \nCanon Sure Shot Zoom XL  \nRollei Infrared 400  \nShot during a ski trip in the Dolomites\n\nDeveloped and scanned by lab ([https://svilupporullino.com/](https://svilupporullino.com/))","score":64,"nsfw":false,"grayscale":false,"timestamp":1778933118,"sprocket":false,"camera_make":"canon","film_make":"rollei","film_speed":400,"focal_length":39,"images":[{"resolution":"low","url":"https://d3i73ktnzbi69i.cloudfront.net/6df76705-7139-4ba1-a6a4-a9aed71a1884.jpeg","width":482,"height":720},{"resolution":"medium","url":"https://d3i73ktnzbi69i.cloudfront.net/863ca570-6493-4f50-b453-50414b9acf12.jpeg","width":723,"height":1080},{"resolution":"high","url":"https://d3i73ktnzbi69i.cloudfront.net/d380083e-ae04-4021-a522-d210794ff272.jpeg","width":965,"height":1440},{"resolution":"raw","url":"https://d3i73ktnzbi69i.cloudfront.net/89757aee-2561-4802-a4da-be77fc5522b0.jpeg","width":2102,"height":3138}],"colors":[{"hex":"#efeef3","css":"whitesmoke","html":"white","percent":0.63267059},{"hex":"#7d7c7a","css":"grey","html":"gray","percent":0.150389},{"hex":"#b8b6b7","css":"silver","html":"gray","percent":0.12095436},{"hex":"#12110f","css":"black","html":"black","percent":0.08656063},{"hex":"#444341","css":"darkslategray","html":"gray","percent":0.00942543}],"keywords":[{"word":"dolomites","weight":0.16666667},{"word":"ski","weight":0.16666667},{"word":"trip","weight":0.16666667},{"word":"canon","weight":0.16666667},{"word":"xl","weight":0.16666667},{"word":"rollei","weight":0.16666667}]}